An ode to clock
You always work hard
I tried to work hard
Times go fast
Our life past
Tik tok you make sound
Sometimes, it makes my heart pound
Because I'm waitimg
Because I'm trailing
Everybody loves you
I'm curious who invent you
I'll be thankful to inventor of you
I hope you to rest
But it'll be worst
You and me are always together
You make us to gather
When you are starving
You make us confusing
Dear clock, you love me?
Please always be with me!
I think your ode is very good. Your ode has rhyming and I think you prepared this ode hard.
ReplyDeleteclockyclocky!
ReplyDeleteToday morning My alarm clock get broked, so I really agree with thisㅜㅠ
I think its pretty cool-:)
Jihee,
ReplyDeleteOverall, you wrote a decent ode. Your last stanza, though, was unclear. Writing is thinking; and in this sense, the challenge for a writer is to come up with lines that make sense and words that effectively express a clear message.